I have always been a fan of short fiction. I love the way the tiny tales seem to pack a punch in such short verses. As they say, Brevity is the wit of the soul. I am going to try and use that in the below verses. When I first started thinking about the topics , somehow I wanted to write about anything and everything that started with the letter 'B'. Finally, I decided I shall indeed write about all of them. So here we go. - short fictions on different things - Betrayal, Bold, Beautiful, Brave, Bird, Binoculars, Broken, Book
#1
Betrayal of the worst kind.
He looked at his mother with accusing eyes.
The promised candy happened to be on the doctor's table.
#2
Be bold they said.
Be beautiful they said.
Being both, she wondered why no one told her about the ensuing loneliness.
#3
Brave face on, she watched
As the tattoo took the shape of a free bird
Somehow the pain in her heart seemed more tolerable now
#4
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
To him, it was her eyes that held him captive
Even through binoculars, they seemed to look right into his soul
#5
Broken heart. Betrayed soul.
They searched for happiness in the bookstore
Cupid smiled as they both picked the same book
Wonderful short fiction! Love the humor in #1 and #5, and #2 and #3 are just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteI love them all! I too love short fiction, but I'm finding that perhaps I've given myself too small a limit this month. So long as I'm writing every day I guess it's okay.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex ! Yeah, it's okay as long as you are writing :)
DeleteWonderful! Fiction is challenging and short fiction all the more so.. Good job
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Thanks Archana :)
DeleteOhh Gayathri, these are great! Each one, indeed, is notable for its brevity.
ReplyDeleteThanks Prudhvi ! :)
DeleteWow. These are awesome. Short and deep(some) and thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteI can never write short stories. I am thing for detail. I will even explain the dust that will be flying around., its shape and texture.
So, how do you do it?
Thanks :) For me, short stories are easy to come ! Words stripped to their bare minimum.
DeleteWOW!! great short fiction!! Will be back for more.
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Thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteVery Creative <3 Good luck with the challenge <3 I'll be back <3
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Delete#3 just spoke to me! Lovely ones, Gayathri!
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Deepa
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